Saturday, February 11, 2012

An ode to my oldman

I remember the first time I looked at you,
you were an acquaintance quite anew.
A tad too old to skip and play around,
a tad too young to be quiet sans a sound.

Don't make so much noise;
Oh! please do put back your toys;
lean not against the wall
at home, don't play the ball;
come, come, listen to the news
in the future, it would be of some use;
exercise every part from toe to head
that alone would guarantee a healthy future ahead.

Geez!Those were your advices tested and tried
but I quite never did take it in the right stride,
past are the days of my ignorant childhood
and now realization has hit hard, like it should.

The dormant values you had in me, imbibe
did truly help in life's battles, to survive.
All these years have been a concoction of feelings.
A laughter here and an anger there,
a spectrum of emotions I got to wear.

Looking back I feel a pang of rue
for having initially failed to realize the true you;
took a while to bar all that strict demeanor
and identify that you are a man like no other;

Your steady, brisk walk,
a clear, practical talk,
it is as if you mock,
me, with your death and I can't hide my shock.

Those strolls on the beach;
the values that you would preach,
along with narration of your life's incident
and listening to it for the nth time, its like the first time I would pretend.

I miss you my friend.
I believed you would break the life-death trend
and stay with me till my end.
But you have chosen to leave me, to help me grow,
to be matured and accept life's flow.

You have molded me, a time too many,
as you did with my docile granny;
wishing you two a happy togetherness in heaven
plus for all those lives to come, in the cycle of seven.



5 comments:

  1. வருந்தாதே தோழியே..!!
    உடலுக்கு தானடி பிரிவு
    உங்கள் உறவுக்கு அல்ல..!! - உந்தன்
    இனம் புரியாத அன்புக்கு உருவன் வேண்டுமா..?!?
    மரணம் எனும் புதைகுழி
    மாமனிதர்களையும் விரைவில் இழுத்துச் செல்லும்.!
    அவரது இறப்பு
    உனக்கு பேரிழப்பு..!!- பெண்ணே நீ
    உன் மனதில் அமைதி கொள் ..!!
    உன் மனக்கண்ணில் அவர் தெரிவார்..!!
    அவரது போதனைகள் - பின்னாளிள்
    உன் வாழ்வின் சாதனைகள்..!!
    அவரது பாசக் கதிர்வீச்சில் - என்றும்
    நீ பாதுகாப்பாய் வாழ்வாய்..!!

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    1. Thank you for these heartwarming words. He would have totally adored you! He loves poems especially Tamil ones.
      BTW please post your Tamil poems in a blog. It will do the language a favor.

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  2. I'm sure this poem has reached him wherever he is right now.

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  3. @Kavitha, A true befitting tribute to your grandpa!! As Manipriya rightly points out through her beautiful verses, Death is only to the physical self, not to the inner-atman. Do make him proud through your achievements and glory :)

    PS: Is there any inner philosophical meaning behind the 'Cycle of seven'?!

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    1. My grandparents were *made for each other* type. So that phrase supposedly expresses my wish, that all the seven 'jenmam'(or whatever is left of it) they will stay together, happily.

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